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First Audio Remastered
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 9:01 pm
by Aemeth
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 9:54 pm
by trashtalkr
Deeje, that was awesome. Alot better than your first one, that's for sure. There were some lines in the middle that were hard to understand, but that may just be the mic. Great job
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 10:35 pm
by Aemeth
word, i agree there is still some obvious areas for improvement, but ima leave it at that for now and start an emotional song..
Posted: Fri Jan 21, 2005 10:45 pm
by trashtalkr
Sounds good to me. I've read some of your emotional pieces and they're great. Are you gonna put music to that one poem your wrote?
Posted: Sat Jan 22, 2005 7:30 pm
by Aemeth
nah nah..
this one i am going to go off on peeps..its gonna be a life changer as oppose to ah wow thats deep..ya know..more of a thought song i should say..
lyrics like
ignorance with insecurity turns soldiers into jokes/
I know more about dope than addicts, and iont even smoke//
Never choke, on the lies, thas why Im still standin here/
I dont fall for peer pressure, cuz I am the peer//
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:32 am
by trashtalkr
Oh ok...good luck with that. I know that those are the hardest type to write. Be sure to post when you have it done....I really want to hear it
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:34 am
by Aemeth
word..it might be in a lil bit tho cuz i got some an audio battle i got myself into..well see tho
Posted: Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:35 am
by trashtalkr
audio battle? dang. Where at? On Truth Pages or Rapboard?
Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2005 6:43 pm
by AYHJA
Well....
I just got a chance to listen to it, and I've decided that the beat just doesn't suit your voice or style very well...If I may ask in order to offer a few style points, when you're listening to music, what kind of shit makes you want to freestyle crazy..?
For example, Lil John instrumentals...Man, them shits are crazy...Strangely, whenever I write raps, I've usually been listening to something Lil John dropped his big toe in...
Then, I have artists that make me want to flow...On one of Busta Rhymes old albums, he had a song with Ma$e and Puffy, called "The Body Rock"...OMFG, Ma$e killed that shit...But anyway, who are some of your influences..?
Posted: Sun Feb 20, 2005 8:27 pm
by Aemeth
jay-z kweli nas lil flip are the main ones, i try to come with flow like flip, swagger like jay-z, hard truth like kweli, and nas, iono, i jus know i listened to him a lot for a while lol..
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