Hustla's Anthem

#1

Ight, I took what yall said about my last track and tried to apply it best I could...please give a lil feed on my newest track, Hustla's Anthem..
I put a lot more effort into this, tried to flow a lil better...didn't quite get all the echoes perfectly but for the most part I think it's aaight...

*crosses fingers*

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Lost Ghost · #2

lyrics are nice.....its improved......but your main problem still lingers....its just the way you flow....the way your voice sounds on a track isn't enjoyable.... You're trying....and its evident...like I said you've improved on this one...the flow was better but the way you sound still makes me cringe....and I dont know if thats fixable man...

#3

I still got the same beefs...

You need to hustle up on about 3 hunnied bucks of studio time...Your flow is like Silk the Shockers...Rushed in spots, and makes it seem thrown together...Your wanting to be a lyricst is going to hurt you on tracks like this...This is why I keep telling you to find something slow, laid back and cool to rhyme to...You can say what you want, and how you want, and it dont' sound pieced together...Your trying to ride the beat and say what you want to say isn't going to happen...You need to pick which one that you wanna do...

Lost Ghost · #4

aight...second third and fourth listen through.....its much improved...... my main point to you the first time through was that.....as smart as you are...why you persist on this? persistance doesnt always equal sucess.......you got bigger fish to fry....the music industry is rough........to me it seems like you're devoting your time to the wrong things......rapping should be a hobby..

#5

good project, definite progress. use your lungs,.. and practice dropping with a consistency. pump them lungs full and drain them dry.

#6

LG, you telling this man what he can and can't do with his life is getting REAL tired...Sooper tired...You having your opinion is one thing, but telling the man he sucks beyond all is just...Makes no sense...

Why don't you show him how its done..? Can't wait to hear your audios...

#7

Having the courage to fail is a sign you have the potential to succeed.

#8

That is deep Raum. But you are correct! Keep at it m8 you will succeed!

#9

Eh I don't really mind LG too much anymore lol...

But LG dawg, it is just a hobby, I got like 5 songs after a year of this...And I think I should put a lil more time in first b4 I write it off completely...Especially when it's a passion..

Lost Ghost · #10

...I was never hatin' in this thread.....and never told him he sucks (in this thread) my comments are strictly constructive.......if you'd stop assuming hate everytime you read a post of my recently Ty you'd realize this...