My English Essay on "One Flesh", help!

[Habib]

I kinda get the picture not, thanks people! I would lead my class in English if only I could think like you guys, hahaha...Math is easy for me (which most people find difficult), but English is just so hard!

[Bot]

QUOTE(Deepak)Frankly thats what I would do as well but since he had already written his essay I didnt say it. Although I must point out the best way to getting the best marks are going beyond the brackets and do what A says lol...

It not only allows the teacher to see that you are not confined by normal thinking.  

And as for your question mate, just in your conclusion say it somewhere ....

example  

In conclusion, the poet in the poem †™ ¢‚¬„¢¢‚¬Å¡‚¢†™‚¢‚¢¢¢‚¬Å¡‚¬¦‚¡¢‚¬Å¡‚¬†™¢¢¬‚¹¢‚¬¦¢¢¬…œOne Flesh†™ ¢‚¬„¢¢‚¬Å¡‚¢†™‚¢‚¢¢¢‚¬Å¡‚¬¦‚¡¢‚¬Å¡‚¬†™‚¢‚¢¢¢‚¬Å¡‚¬¦‚¾¢‚¬Å¡‚¢ uses intense striking images to describe couple who loved each other so much previously, but as age catches up with them, the love fades away. This however is done from the eyes of the child. A child who might not yet have been able to distingusih the difference between love , passion and physical intimacy. blah blah blah  

you know what i mean?

Never start your conclusion with, "In conclusion..." lol

[Deepak]

Its still high school. It isnt that much of a big deal.